Yet another example from Pravda on the Potomac:
Clement will serve as acting attorney general until a new leader is confirmed by the Senate.
Sloppy authoritarian-enabling writing and thinking.
Why not just write:
Clement will serve as acting attorney general until a replacement is confirmed by the Senate.
There. Was that so hard?
Because, last I checked, the Senate didn't confirm leaders. It confirmed Presidential appointments to offices, like that of the "Attorney General."
Gee, if this keeps up, I might have to write L'il Debbie a stiffly worded letter. Bwa-ha-ha-ha!
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Autocracies have "Leaders." Democracies have "Representatives"
As a general rule, Democracies don't need no fucking leaders...It is better for them if those who are elected to wield the power of the People do NOT regard themselves as 'leaders.' They're not. They're just one (or several) among the millions.
our "Leaders."
Fuck
Style
It's typical newswriting style not to repeat specific nouns in the space of a few sentences if you can find something you think is a synonym. It's the same reason they wouldn't write, "Clement will serve as acting Secretary of Justice until a new Secretary is confirmed by the Senate."
The word it should have used is "replacement," as in "Clement will serve as acting Attorney General until a replacement for Gonzales is confirmed by the Senate."
BTW, the AG is not a constitutional officer. The text of the Constitution doesn't mention any specific Cabinet officers or departments, only that there may be "executive Departments" and their heads. The specifics are all determined by Congress in the US Code, from the number of departments to the order of the Presidential Succession Act. If it were otherwise, changes like the Department of Education, or Department of Energy, or making the VA Secretary a cabinet-level position, or DHS, could require amending the Constitution.
Matt, great comment, post updated
Thanks for the clarification, on both counts. I updated the post accordingly.
The larger, essential point at issue is what they "think" "leader" is a synonym for, as you understand.
Once you start noticing this one, you see it everywhere, each occurrence gradually sapping the immune system of the Republic and the ability to resist or even perceive tyranny.
We. Are. Going. To. Die. We must restore hope in the world. We must bring forth a new way of living that can sustain the world. Or else it is not just us who will die but everyone. What have we got to lose? Go forth and Fight!—Xan
"First they ignore you, then they ridicule you, then they fight you, then you win." -- Mahatma Gandhi
Quote: "typical Newswriting style" -- aka lazy excuse
The editors I worked for tore strips off their reporters for what Matt suggests is "typical" nowadays. It's laziness, pure and simple; besides, the AP Stylebook shows that it's INACCURATE.
Matt wrote:It’s typical newswriting style not to repeat specific nouns in the space of a few sentences if you can find something you think is a synonym.
I don't have my copy of the AP stylebook to hand
so I can't from it. (I should have waited to respond on the AP stuff, since it now occurs to me that the blog has not one, but two Hildy Johnsons on it, whose expertise is even greater than my own [dodges zucchinni]. So Xan, don't hold back...)
In any case, Matt's suggested wording is better than mine.
We. Are. Going. To. Die. We must restore hope in the world. We must bring forth a new way of living that can sustain the world. Or else it is not just us who will die but everyone. What have we got to lose? Go forth and Fight!—Xan
"First they ignore you, then they ridicule you, then they fight you, then you win." -- Mahatma Gandhi
I have no quibble with Matt's rewrite.
If I were on the desk for the original story it would have gone back to the reporter for rewrite, though. My Stylebook dates to 1989 (yeah, I have the spiral wirebound blue cover!)
Over time though I've noticed in every dead-tree paper I read that AP Style is honored more in the breach than the observance, especially since about 2000.
I wonder if "liberal bias" in the "news media" included attention to things like grammar, spelling, and proper usage? Certainly other "facts have a liberal bias", as we've been told before.
AG, Constitutional Officer
With all due respect to Matt:
The U.S. Attorney General is a “Constitutional Officer.”
U.S. Constitution Article II, Section 2, clause 2:
28 U.S.C. Section 503:
The Supreme Court has determined, by well settled decisions, the definitions of what an “officer” is:
From United States v. Hartwell, 73 U.S. 385 (1868):
Further in Burnap v. United States, 252 U.S. 512 (1920):
I realize that many on the Right have made the argument that Alberto Gonzales is (was) not a “Constitutional Officer” – maybe consider their motives...
The Bill of Rights is a born rebel. It reeks with sedition. In every clause it shakes its fist in the face of constituted authority. . . . it is the one guaranty of human freedom to the American people. - Frank Irving Cobb
The Bill of Rights is a born rebel. It reeks with sedition. In every clause it shakes its fist in the face of constituted authority. . . . it is the one guaranty of human freedom to the American people. - Frank Irving Cobb